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My Friend, Shadow-Lover

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When your infectious
sweetness spreads between you and
me, we are happy.
My friend requested that I wrote a poem about her. I thought about it for a while, and came up with this.

The special thing about our relationship is the way we are able to cheer each other up. We both have good and bad days and we try to support each other during the bad days. I hoped for this Haiku to emphasise that.

Go look at :iconshadow-lover4127: :D <3
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First of all, it's a very short and simple poem. It's pretty easy to understand and it says all there is to be said just in a few words. That makes it pleasant to read and re-read without it getting old. But it's still quite deep and meaningful. I specially like the message of happiness you transmit while thinking about your friend, suggesting that you really care about each other. It's also a nice contrast to your usually longer poems, thus adding some variety to your work. I hope you find the inspiration to keep writing like this and best of luck to you and your friend <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>