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Phantom

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October 8, 2014
Phantom by AzureNebulae
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She's always seen during
daylight -
yet her beauty is
nocturnal.

I, with shaking hands
[and nerves],
wrapped her round me
like a scarf,

though she still gives
me midnight chills
and spasms of pain

                        Her friends pick daisies and
                        pierce the stems with their
                        fingernails,
                        link them together like
                        married couples
                        who are pulled out of their
                        beds by love

[pushed back down
by alcohol and the
need to please].

She bent over,
between my knees -
showed me a good time,
alright.
My noose scarf
turned to a shawl
the way seasons inevitably
change

                       Hearts litter the room as
                       the house of cards fall,
                       the king and queen of the pack
                       face up to the ceiling -
                       they are trapped;
                      pick up the diamonds, darling--
                       [never mind the jack]

I woke up to lightning's
metallic scent,
she laid there: spent
and I pressed my finger
to her lips
as a nice gesture.

I leaned in, closer,
whispered sweet
nothingness into her ear

[fleeting fingers
through hair],

then I started screeching:

      her silence is just too beautiful to bear.
Try reading it normally, and then try reading each column separately.

**stupid typo has been fixed
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FridgePoetProject's avatar
Stunning!  I mean that literally -- at the end I found myself staring at the screen for a moment, stunned by the impact of that ending.  Another incredible piece of poetry!  You are a remarkable talent!  :)