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Our dark, distant dreams
captivate us more than our
designed fantasies.
A haiku I suddenly made, I'm not sure about everyone else but when I wake up from a dream which included someone from the past, I end up thinking about them all day (and beyond). Fantasies made consciously are less precious, somehow.
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The pre-conceived notion of what a "dream" actually is and where it comes from has been debated since the beginning of time. While doing research on the human brain (through a silly app I had on my phone) There was a whole lot of discussion on the science of sleep and it's relation to "the third eye". (pineal gland) Our fantasies are derived from what we perceive as "real." The measure of that perception, whether in wake, dream or influence, is the only means of truly making a true grasp of "reality."

You wrote a very captivating piece and I appreciated it very much. :)

- Brandon
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the premises of this as it is very thought provoking and interesting at the same time. I think dreams can have a powerful effect on the human mind, especially when they are of a past event. But with daydreams/fantasies, well you have more control over them to a certain degree. Very beautiful work! :heart:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much c: <3 I'm glad you like it
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
c:
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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cattservant Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
...perhaps, this is what
the gods feel contemplating
on their universe.
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe <3
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cattservant Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Some things are too large,
While others are much too small.
Do you remember?
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's cool <3
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cattservant Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Cool and dry
a desirable
condition
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
c:
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cattservant Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
rest
holiday
play
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Dreams sure are powerful. Don't get lost in them, OK? :heart:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I try not to, although it is hard sometimes <3
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
True words. They tend to be better than reality... <3
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Mhm <3
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
<3
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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RestrictedA Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
This is so true...

Except for the story (in NaNoWriMo) I'm writing, which is sort of based off of something those dreams surround... It feels good, it just seems to flow off my fingers...
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I see owo I'd like to read it some time <3
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RestrictedA Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Really? I'm really glad to hear that :D

Also, I didn't mean you were wrong.
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I really would owo and of course not :) <3
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RestrictedA Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
:D
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
c:
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
That is so true. I often dream about old times. And these are no happy dreams.
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww :( same here <3
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:(
:heart:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*hugs* <3
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
*hugs back* <3
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww owo
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
c:
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