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The biggest value of this poem lies within its imagery - it is very original and very coherent throughout the whole poem, which is the feature that many poems lack and a feature I value a lot, it shows that the reader has actually put thought into their writing <3 Metaphors you used are both very suggestive and they paint the relationship between the subject and the receiver very well - suggesting that subject pays more attention to the receiver than to themselves and that they are somehow suppressing themselves around the receiver, whilst the receiver seems to be focused more on their own emotional distress. It seems that the receiver is idolised and the nature of this relation really fits the imagery used - in a way it is asymmetrical the same way as relationship between the piece of art and its worshipper would be, with all the attention drawn to only one side of the relation.
It is a free verse poem and it flows well, being pleasant to read. I think that use of the saying 'beauty is only skin deep' along with the rest of the stanza was incredibly clever - combining the phrase about beauty being only shallow worth with the image of the subject wrapping themselves around the receiver seems to underline how they don't think much abut their own worth (being the shallow layer covering the receiver) compared to the receiver (what's inside).
Overall I think it is a well-thought poem and it shows.