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i. when the weight of the world is on their shoulders, leave them be.
when the heaviness transfers to you,
expect their sympathy.

ii. goodnight cuddles and kisses add a nice touch
to a relationship; it is far too much
for them to ask you to listen.
too much time is wasted, you see.

iii. yes, when they are curled up crying with their blanket or duvet or whatever instead of you for warmth, you know you're doing well.
they are beginning to tell
that you only want them for your own need.

iv. endless messages flood your phone. inbox. voicemail. letterbox. they want you but you are not there.
you don't care. congratulations - you're not too attached.

v. now it's the time to find someone new
to bend-over-backwards and jump through hoops for you.
she has gone crawling to someone else for support and is trying to forget your existence.


and just how do you feel about that?
it happens far too often these days.

**Given a :iconlitrecognition: 30/4/14
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LindArtz Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
Amen to that!
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) <3
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Waffles-Of-Gondolyn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is true and powerful . it's so hard to go through stuff like this . :tighthug: </3
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is ;w; and thanks <3
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DarkMousyRulezAll Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
...unfortunately you're right, it does happen far too often. To a lot of people. Kitty Boop I'm sorry you've had to feel this way as well- Bunny Girl Emoji-46 (Sowwy) [V3] Your writing was really beautiful tho- touching. 
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much ;w; :iconsweethugplz: <3
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Phantomtigers Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that ending line heh :heart: there's some people that I would like to ask that question...
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same <3 I never have to courage to do so though
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Phantomtigers Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
with some people I've been glad that I just coldly watched them leave my life. Lashing out in the moment and showing how much it really hurt would have felt like admitting defeat or something :D maybe that's just my pride though
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's true c:
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, it's too true : ( I kind of just want to show this to people just for them to see how they're making others feel. And might I say, it's very well written ♥ I love how blunt and honest it is kind of like Hazel Grace from The Fault In Our Stars, if you'll mind the reference owo! Good job!! *cues epic clap*
 Epic clap 
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :iconsweethugplz: I guess I just know the feeling almost too well, I found it easy to write about it. <3
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, you're welcome :iconsnugplz: And I know what you mean, sadly ♥ Sorry you have to feel that way
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's ok <3 I think most people have felt it before
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Yes, unfortunately
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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cattservant Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
"... that?"
Turn to the Cats
for instruction
on invulnerability!
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Too true c: <3
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cattservant Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
And a fine good morning
to you!
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:la:
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:iconcattservant:
cattservant Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
And a finer
good afternoon!

[Full Moon tomorrow.]
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes owo good evening <3
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MayEbony Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this really summed up some major relationships in my life.  You've chosen the exact right words all the way through.  And I'm very sorry that you've experienced this to be able to write about it :(
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks owo and it's ok <3
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:iconmayebony:
MayEbony Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mini Gif Cat by mydreammagic
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awwwwww zwz
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Manouilidis Featured By Owner May 21, 2014   General Artist
I so love this one!!! I can so relate to being in a situation like this, you need somone and the person does not care!! This is a great writing job dear!!! really!!! :hug:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm really glad you like it :D Thanks :iconsweethugplz: <3
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Manouilidis Featured By Owner May 23, 2014   General Artist
you are so very welcome sweetheart!!
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww :la:
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Manouilidis Featured By Owner May 24, 2014   General Artist
:D
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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WishingUnderThatStar Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
An interesting take on something that, in one way or another, we've all come across in our lives. The deliberate question at the end was a nice touch, too.
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :) it means a lot <3
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think all of us have had to deal with people taking us for granted and that is what makes this poem rather easy to relate to. Have to say this is really enjoyable and the descriptions as well as the emotions here are so realistic and profound :D
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) and yeah, it's something that makes me really sad, being taken for granted <3
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My ex boyfriend took me for granted so I can relate to this poem :D
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:iconazurenebulae:
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I see :hug: <3
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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curlscat Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Writer
I loved it straight from the title.
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) <3
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L-Inque Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats on your DLR! 

The piece is all too true and very well written  :)
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :la: <3
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
and just how do you feel about that?

I love the way you ended this poem. The question is already answered of course, yet it awaits a response. It sends a message that will likely be unrecognized.

:hug:

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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it <3
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The second-person perspective directed toward the emotional abuser is a perfect choice for this piece. Not only is it unique, but it ratchets up the emotional tension. I love this :heart:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much for the lovely comment. I am glad you like it :la: <3
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbigheartplz:
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