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i. when the weight of the world is on their shoulders, leave them be.
when the heaviness transfers to you,
expect their sympathy.

ii. goodnight cuddles and kisses add a nice touch
to a relationship; it is far too much
for them to ask you to listen.
too much time is wasted, you see.

iii. yes, when they are curled up crying with their blanket or duvet or whatever instead of you for warmth, you know you're doing well.
they are beginning to tell
that you only want them for your own need.

iv. endless messages flood your phone. inbox. voicemail. letterbox. they want you but you are not there.
you don't care. congratulations - you're not too attached.

v. now it's the time to find someone new
to bend-over-backwards and jump through hoops for you.
she has gone crawling to someone else for support and is trying to forget your existence.

and just how do you feel about that?
it happens far too often these days.

**Given a :iconlitrecognition: 30/4/14
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LindArtz Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Amen to that!
Waffles-Of-Gondolyn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is true and powerful . it's so hard to go through stuff like this . :tighthug: </3
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is ;w; and thanks <3
DarkMousyRulezAll Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
...unfortunately you're right, it does happen far too often. To a lot of people. Kitty Boop I'm sorry you've had to feel this way as well- Bunny Girl Emoji-46 (Sowwy) [V3] Your writing was really beautiful tho- touching. 
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much ;w; :iconsweethugplz: <3
Phantomtigers Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that ending line heh :heart: there's some people that I would like to ask that question...
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same <3 I never have to courage to do so though
Phantomtigers Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
with some people I've been glad that I just coldly watched them leave my life. Lashing out in the moment and showing how much it really hurt would have felt like admitting defeat or something :D maybe that's just my pride though
AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's true c:
xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, it's too true : ( I kind of just want to show this to people just for them to see how they're making others feel. And might I say, it's very well written ♥ I love how blunt and honest it is kind of like Hazel Grace from The Fault In Our Stars, if you'll mind the reference owo! Good job!! *cues epic clap*
 Epic clap 
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